Page 192: Church and Rescue
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Books Don't Work Here
A meta flavored webcomic with no 4th wall and a plot about a webcomic actress and the challenges she has to face. You know imaginary scripts, unreliable narrators, plot holes, meta walls, wacky physics, mad science, and budget cuts. Updates Thursdays!
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Uh, the short story is bugged now. I can view it on the home page but trying to go to it specifically (eg. to look at comments) gives a 400 error. Link is https://booksdontworkhere.com/comic/%chapters%/no-more/, I’m assuming something is failing to expand a nonexistent chapter. Anyway, I’ll leave my comment about it here, so to anyone coming along later, stop reading as the point past this is a spoiler. (Once this gets resolved and my comment gets deleted, I’ll replace it on the appropriate page so that stops being an issue.)
Ah, Dot’s introduction was great. Marred a little by the phrasing being a bit off, as it is across most of this story, but the bait ‘n’ switch effect still gets across perfectly. Might have something to do with reading a lot of Garfield.
How did the phrasing seem off / in what way?
I think it mainly comes down to the punctuation, followed by the spacing/paragraphing.
ya the formatting didn’t survive the transition from word to patreon, not sure how to fix that.
Assuming that they didn’t write their software horribly (which is a very real possibility), the other explanation is that they’re using different line endings.