Books Don't Work Here

the next little bit is going to be a bit wordy. Sadly all my wonderful schooling on pacing and tension doesn’t deal with pictures so I am experimenting a bit here. If anyone has feed back that would be wonderful. I never really paid attention to pacing in comics specifically before and everything I learned deals with words only. That and since I am posting 5 days a week some people are reading it all at once while others read it a day at a time. I am working to please everybody but there will be a bit of a learning curve. Some spots will be a bit slow, some too wordy, and some too fast. If you let me know which is which I won’t have to spend as much time second guessing and can instead work on improving the script that I don’t acknowledge exists.