Page 34: Almost what you expect
Since I said I wasn’t going to work on this chapter I thought I would work on the next. I’ve gone through a few revisions of the new character but I am not quite happy with her yet. I am also planning on upping the plot after I have introduced the main characters. I have yet to decide if I will be able to squeeze that into chapter three or if it will have to wait till chapter four.
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